On Monday the September of 7 Mrs Parker told us It is important to brush your teeth because if you don't brush your teeth you will get bad breath so what we did was Mrs Parker give room 7 a tooth brush to brush our teeth it was fun we had 2 minutes to brush our teeth back forth and also the sides of your teeth it was really fun and nice.
Well done Simeon. Just remember to read your work back to yourself out loud. You've got one really long sentence here. It would be much easier to read with more full stops to let the reader breathe!
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