WALT: write a recount using connectives and descriptive language.
This is my recount of Butterfly Creek. I found it hard to sit down and write it. Next time I will sit down and never walk around and talk.
Butterfly Creek - By Simeon
We went to butterfly creek on Monday the 16th of March. Room 7 and 5 went on the bus we went to butterfly creek to learn about butterflies and dinosaurs, crocodiles, and different creatures.
And we went on the train, on the train everybody was screaming. We went around in circles.
After lunch, in the crocodile show, Paul's friend grabbed meat and made the crocodile come and eat it. I felt scared because I thought the man was going to get eaten.